Các cách viết IELTS writing task 2
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer.
Answers
Answer 1:
There is no doubt that many things had changed in the last few decades; some changes are for betterment and some changes are for worse. One of the fields which were greatly affected by the advent of technology is the way of interaction and communication.
Without any doubt, the technology has changed the way we lead our lives and these changes are prominent over the last decade. There are several improvements of life due to the positive effects of technology and there are some negative impacts as well. One area that has dramatically changed is the way we communicate and maintain our relationship now-a-days. And in my opinion the technology has positively affected our communication and the way we make relationship and maintain it. Despite some negative effects, most of us enjoy the positive things the technology has bought for us.
In the past, the ways of interaction were very limited. Unleash our imagination;if you want to speak with your friend, you would have to go directly to hishouse or send him a message which may take few days to get a respond. I completely believe that technology has agreat tangible effect on our communication. Nowadays, it’s very easy to interactwith your relatives -and even with the government and organizations- either byemails, mobiles, chatting, etc… And I think that this has improved the relationships and enhanced it.
We no longer need to visit a relative or friend to get updates. Alternatively we can let them know our updates instantly. Besides personal communications, official and business communication has become easier. Email campaign offers a good marketing opportunity for business owners and people can complain about certain thing using emails without exposing their identity.Not all of the people have the availability of technology and they still use the old form of communication. People now can deceive others using identity theft and fraud identity. The personal touch of communication like hand written letters, face-to-face communications were more effective in some cases. Like meeting your friend is still more important that just writing him an email.
We make so many friends via chatting or social networking which would not have been possible without the advancement of technology and its contribution in the communication. Cell phones, emails and social networking have enhanced the way of communicating and we can talk to anyone with a minimum cost.
It’s now not unusual to prepare for a visit andeven several visits to your relatives and friends in the same day, while in thepast this may have taken several weeks or months. However, despite all that, I still see some failings in the development of the means of interaction. For instance, thevery high cost each person spends every day on communication. Another defect, many elder people are not accustomed to this modern technology.But that doesn’t have a great effect on thepositive role technology has made in the field of interaction between people,and I think these defect are very easy to be solved.
