Các cách viết writing task 2
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or reaching sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words
Answers
Answer 1: (Agreement)
In the last few years, many new ideas and beliefs arose aiming to improve society and reinforce the relation between society’s members. One of the proposed ideas, yet under studying, is to make it compulsory for high school students to do some programmes, of course charity ones, to assist their community.
Firstly, I am completely supporting the idea that: helping promote the society is one of the main duties of a righteous and positive member. Imagine that in the vacation, some youths, and even all ages, work for charitable organizations which help the poor, the sick, the learners and others. Imagine other group cleaning and decorating the streets-of course that won’t affect their dignity- or teaching the young. Indeed that will lead to an extremely modern, civilized and loving community. However, all these are examples, and there are many other ways to improve societies, both charitable and uncharitable methods.
Despite this, the idea of compulsory charitable work doesn’t sound good for me. I believe that making that compulsory, will not lead to the heroic purpose of the charitable work i.e. the inner desire to help others, but, instead, will make it a type of finishing your work.
I know that this proposed idea aims to teach high school students to be responsible to their society and to take care of others, but I think there is a more efficient method. There are now working groups in many schools in different places which do such charitable work and even without inspiration from the school’s administration. So why not make many groups in all schools, and I think that will attract many students.
In conclusion, I think there are other better ways to promote the society without making it compulsory; the sitting compulsory subjects re enough.
On the other hand, a large majority of those interviewed agreed with the idea, viz. unpaid community services should be a compulsory part of high school programmes. They explained that poor and needy families – which are a part of our society – will be benefitted by this idea. Such a programme will help to build a healthy society.
I am strongly of the view that, the social unpaid work should be made a mandatory part of the high school programme.
